Warning more constructive criticism ahead ... I’m not sure how the man fits with the two children and it just looks a bit out of place as to who are they. The father, then he’d to have had to jump across the stream just to get a picture. A stranger, then wouldn’t the children be thinking who is this person?
As always, just my thoughts and I’m not sure what I’d do to fill that area and make it that nice triangle of viewer interest.
I've decided less is more and only added a few of the pieces and also added some leaf/vegitative litter and I think I might all this done. Otherwise I'll just keep fiddling with it and end up doing something OTT- if I haven't already🙄
"You watch the world exploding every single night Dancing in the sun a newborn in the light, Brothers and their fathers joining hands and make a chain The shadow of the Wicker Man is rising up again......" ------"The Wicker Man", by Iron Maiden