Esci Ti-67:Tiran SLA Return of a Shelf Queen-Done! .

I was wondering if it was one of Paul`s (RZ)........i`m pretty much with the lads Mr H in the fact a few more items need to be added, i think your going in the right direction tho matey

Warning more constructive criticism ahead ... I’m not sure how the man fits with the two children and it just looks a bit out of place as to who are they. The father, then he’d to have had to jump across the stream just to get a picture. A stranger, then wouldn’t the children be thinking who is this person?

As always, just my thoughts and I’m not sure what I’d do to fill that area and make it that nice triangle of viewer interest.

I've decided less is more and only added a few of the pieces and also added some leaf/vegitative litter and I think I might all this done. Otherwise I'll just keep fiddling with it and end up doing something OTT- if I haven't already🙄

Thought I didn't recognise him :-)

Looks superb mate, less is more as you say I think the scene is balenced perfectly. I also really like the build up of vegitation and leaves, very effective.

I really like that! Well done.